GBL Story 2nd grade

Your task is to create a very intersting story by picking the option that has more information and expresses more detail and feeling. At the end of the passage you will either have a very intersting or very boring passage, the chocie is all yours. Once upon a time there was a little girl and her mother in the forest. [[Mother and Daughter<-link text]] There were two people.[[two people<-link text]]

In the forest their were beautiful bright flowers and lots of trees. [[text link -> Lots of trees]] In the forest there were flowers of all sorts of colors. The trees were as tall as the universe. [[text link-> Tall trees]]

The two people were in a forest. [[link text-> forest]] The people were in a very pretty forest. [[link text->pretty forest]]

One day the mother and daughter were walking in the forest. A man popped out of the bush and scared them. [[link text-> man]] One day the mother and daughter were walking in the forest. A man with an evil face and dirty clothes jumped out of the bush. The two girls were filled with fear. [[link text-> fear]]

One day the mother and daughter were walking in the forest. A man with an evil face and dirty clothes jumped out of the bush. The two girls were filled with fear. [[link text -> fear]] One day the two girls were walking in the forest. A scary mom popped out of the bush.[[link text -> man]]

The people were walking and a man jumped out. [[link text -> walking]] The two girls were walking in the forest and a scary man jumped out. [[link text-> walking forest]]

The people were walking and a scary man popped out. [[link text -> walking]] The mother and daughter were walking and a man popped out of a bush. [[link text -> 6]]

The girls pulled out a wand and man the man disapear. [[link text -> poofed]] The girls pulled out thier magical wand and made the man disappear into thin air. [[link text -> sparkled]]

The two girls didn't run and hide, instead they pulled out their magic wand and POOFED him away! [[link text -> poofed]] The two girls were scared, but they didn't want to run and hide because the forest was their home. Instead they looked at each other. At the same time they each pulled out a magical wand. The wand sparkled with power when the sunlight hit it. The girls held hands and said a spell. The man POOFED in to mid air. The girls were free! [[link text -> sparkled]]

The next day the two girls were walking in the forest again. Another man jumped from the tree. The man recognized the two girls and started to scream. Then he ran away. [[link text-> 3 final]] The next day the two girls were walking in the forest to collect fruit for their breakfast. A man jumped from a tree in hopes to take the fruit they had collected. The man recognized the two girls because his brother was the man they poofed away. The mans face filled with fear he started to cry and scream for help. The girls laughed as the man ran away crying. [[link text ->4 final]]

The next day the two girls were walking in the forest to collect fruit for their breakfast.They were going to make blueberry pancakes. A man jumped from a tree in hopes to take the fruit the girls had collected. The man recognized the two girls because his brother was the man they poofed away the day before. The mans face filled with fear he started to cry and scream for help. The girls filled with laughter as the man ran away crying. [[link text ->1 Great final]] The next day the two girls were walking in the forest again for fruit. A man jumped from the tree. The man recognized the two girls because his brother was the man from the day before, he started to cry and he ran home as fast as he could. [[link text -> 2 alright final]]

You did it! You created a very detailed story! Here is the final product! Once upon a time there was a little girl and her mother in the forest. In the forest there were flowers of all sorts of colors. The trees were as tall as the universe. One day the mother and daughter were walking in the forest. A man with an evil face and dirty clothes jumped out of the bush. The two girls were filled with fear. The two girls were scared, but they didn't want to run and hide because the forest was their home. Instead they looked at each other. At the same time they each pulled out a magical wand. The wand sparkled with power when the sunlight hit it. The girls held hands and said a spell. The man POOFED in to mid air. The girls were free! The next day the two girls were walking in the forest to collect fruit for their breakfast.They were going to make blueberry pancakes. A man jumped from a tree in hopes to take the fruit the girls had collected. The man recognized the two girls because his brother was the man they poofed away the day before. The mans face filled with fear he started to cry and scream for help. The girls filled with laughter as the man ran away crying.

Here is the end of your story. Are there any details that could have more the story more interesting? Once upon a time there was a little girl and her mother in the forest. In the forest there were flowers of all sorts of colors. The trees were as tall as the universe. One day the mother and daughter were walking in the forest. A man with an evil face and dirty clothes jumped out of the bush. The two girls were filled with fear. The two girls were scared, but they didn't want to run and hide because the forest was their home. Instead they looked at each other. At the same time they each pulled out a magical wand. The wand sparkled with power when the sunlight hit it. The girls held hands and said a spell. The man POOFED in to mid air. The girls were free! The next day the two girls were walking in the forest again for fruit. A man jumped from the tree. The man recognized the two girls because his brother was the man from the day before, he started to cry and he ran home as fast as he could.

You made it to the end! There were some good chocies to add detail to the story, however there were better options. Once upon a time there was a little girl and her mother in the forest. In the forest their were beautiful bright flowers and lots of trees. One day the mother and daughter were walking in the forest. A man popped out of the bush and scared them. The girls pulled out a wand and man the man disappear.The next day the two girls were walking in the forest again. Another man jumped from the tree. The man recognized the two girls and started to scream. Then he ran away.

Here is your final story Once upon a time there was a little girl and her mother in the forest. In the forest there were flowers of all sorts of colors. The trees were as tall as the universe. One day the mother and daughter were walking in the forest. A man with an evil face and dirty clothes jumped out of the bush. The two girls were filled with fear. The two girls didn't run and hide, instead they pulled out their magic wand and POOFED him away! The next day the two girls were walking in the forest to collect fruit for their breakfast. A man jumped from a tree in hopes to take the fruit they had collected. The man recognized the two girls because his brother was the man they poofed away. The mans face filled with fear he started to cry and scream for help. The girls laughed as the man ran away crying.

The girls used their magical wand and made the man disappear. [[link text -> 6!]] The girls made the man disappear. [[link text -> Less]]

The next day the 2 girls were walking and another guy comes along. The guy knows what the 2 girls did to the man yesterday, so he runs away crying for help. [[link text-> 6 ending]] The next day they were walking and someone comes along. The person recognizes them and runs away. [[link text -> 5 ending]]

The next day they made another man disappear because he was so scared. [[link text-> 7 ending]] They made another man disappear. [[bad 2 ending]]

The girls made the man disappear. [[link text -> BAD 3 ENDING]] The girls weren't scared of the man instead they used their magic and made the man disappear. [[link text -> 6!]]

The girls made the man disapear. [[link text -> BAD ENDING]] The girls weren't scared of the man instead they used their magic and made the man dissapear. [[link text -> 6!]]

You did not pick any of the options that made the story more detailed. Here is the story you created based off your chocies. There were two people. The two people were in a forest. The two girls were walking in the forest and a scary man jumped out. The girls made the man disappear.

Here is the end of yout story. Try again to see if you can make it more interesting. There were two people. The people were in a very pretty forest. The girls used their magical wand and made the man disappear.The next day the 2 girls were walking and another guy comes along. The guy knows what the 2 girls did to the man yesterday, so he runs away crying for help.

You made it to the end. Is there anything you would change to make it more interesting? There were two people. The people were in a very pretty forest. The people were walking and a scary man popped out. The girls weren't scared of the man instead they used their magic and made the man disappear. The next day they were walking and someone comes along. The person recognizes them and runs away.

Here is the end of your story try again to see if you can make it more interesting. There were two people. The people were in a very pretty forest. The people were walking and a scary man popped out.The girls made the man disappear.They made another man disappear.

You made it to the end. There were two people. The people were in a very pretty forest. The people were walking and a scary man popped out.The girls made the man disappear. The next day they made another man disappear because he was so scared.

The end. There were better chocies There were two people. The two people were in a forest. The people were walking and a man jumped out. The girls made the man disappear.